Tok presentation, Am i doing this right?

[FeralKid]

it is still blurry!

but!

this is my first TOk presentation and as our awful teacher gave us no guide lines or brief explanation on how to do it, well..

i have to relate ethics

and i am lately researching about cannibalism/death penalty cases

I encountered this Shocking case if this Japanese man Issei Sagawa, who after murdering a german woman in france got out of it because of his wealthy daddy and (very very shocking) became a Celebrity in Japan (author, guest in programs, porn star)

vs.

Unfair case of a woman executed in a muslim country because left husban who have beaten her up..

now!

Knowledge issue:

(still blurry) - How do we know that ethics is applied in modern society when external factors such as money,mass media, popularity,culture can deviate it?

I know... probably i am still far away from a decent presentation... any tips ?

Thank you:)

[brinley]

it is still blurry!

but!

this is my first TOk presentation and as our awful teacher gave us no guide lines or brief explanation on how to do it, well..

i have to relate ethics

and i am lately researching about cannibalism/death penalty cases

I encountered this Shocking case if this Japanese man Issei Sagawa, who after murdering a german woman in france got out of it because of his wealthy daddy and (very very shocking) became a Celebrity in Japan (author, guest in programs, porn star)

vs.

Unfair case of a woman executed in a muslim country because left husban who have beaten her up..

now!

Knowledge issue:

(still blurry) - How do we know that ethics is applied in modern society when external factors such as money,mass media, popularity,culture can deviate it?

I know... probably i am still far away from a decent presentation... any tips ?

Thank you:)

I did my presentation last year, and i got really good on it, so i would just say that you need to narrow it down more. like be more specific. ib doesnt like really general statements, so saying that ethics is applied in modern society is a bit vague. also, if you come up with your knowledge issue, we called them problems of knowledge, then you can narrow it down and use the examples as specific problems in relation to the main idea of "how do we know that ethics is applied.. etc/)

for example, i did my project on graffiti. my problem of knowledge was graffiti as an art form vs. graffiti as vandalism. and i incorporated ways of knowing such as perception into it.

i dont really know if this is helpful? haha