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[sigrid94]

Heey,

I am writing my TOK essay final, and I had to do quite a few changes on my introduction and so forth. The problem is that now my conclusion is a whole page, aka 280 words , is that acceptable? or can i cut the introduction into 2-3 paragraphs?
happy if someone could let me know

[Desy Glau]

you're supposed to only have one paragraph each for your intro and conclusion. for intro just try and catch reader's attention, define key terms etc and introduce the KI. for conclusion try to summarise what you've said but you don't need to restate everything...and close the essay.