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What do you think of this extended essay?

History: The effects of European Antiziganism on the culture appropriation of the Rroma people.

or: The effects of European Antiziganism and its contribution to the stereotyping of the Rroma people.

which one sounds better?

is the topic too broad?

i'm open to diferent ideas, but I still want it to be about the plight of the Rroma people.

any ideas/suggestions would be helpful.

thanks

PS antiziganism is racism or hostility directed at the Rroma people

Edited by Sorry...What?, Feb 06, 2012 - 21:23.

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Sorry... What?



They're all too broad in my opinion. I just see you writing a narrative essay for those, try to narrow it down to a point where you're answering a question instead of telling the reader what has happened during those times.

The second question you've put forward is a lot better than your first.

[spereira14]

I like the second one better, I don't know why, but it just sounds much nicer. I think the topic might be a bit broad but it depends on how you focus it, maybe instead of saying "Eurpoean Antiziganism", you could say "the antiziganism of X and Y countries".