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[jeanlean]

Hi there,

So after making up her own essay questions (not questions in the IB format) for my class to write essays on, my Teacher recently assigned an "IB" type of question from past papers. Up till this point, I'd been scoring between 20-23 but after she'd gotten another more experienced teacher to moderate my essay, I went down to an 18. She gave me some feedback and said I had "loose grammar" but I don't really know what she means by that. We've just been assigned another question due in about a week's time, but before i start I was wondering if anybody would be willing to look at my essay, give me some advice and tips on how I should approach the next question?

Cheers