John Lakers Posted May 16, 2014 Report Share Posted May 16, 2014 What do you do? Do you write: "This proves the thesis because.." Is it a transition sentence? Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thrashmaster Posted May 16, 2014 Report Share Posted May 16, 2014 I prefer, "this is significant because..."I don't think what you have is wildly professional, but on a final exam, the IB graders probably won't care. A good history paper is a good history paper, whether or not you 'break the fourth wall' and refer to your thesis as a thesis. Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chio1012 Posted May 16, 2014 Report Share Posted May 16, 2014 For example if you argue that the alliance system was the main cause of WW1 in your thesis, compared to nationalism and militarism, then in your body paragraphs, you should give examples and analysis to show how it was the main cause, and then a final sentence concluding your analysis and saying "...and due to the interconnectedness of the european countries and their secret treaties, the alliance system was the main cause because it expanded a local war into a global one". 1 Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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