Guest Posted January 21, 2015 Report Share Posted January 21, 2015 So i had already written al IA, but muy teacher told me it was to general, and broad. It was "To what extent did the American civil war advance technology?I still want to do the IA on the civil war, I was thinking on " To what extent was Lincoln's election the main cause of the war?"But it feels too broad, or not good enough. I had also the idea of making it about how important was the march to the sea to win the war, or a certain battle.My teacher told me I could focus on how the war advanced certain technologies, such as rifles or warships but I don't know if that will be enough to wrote about Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
IBSTRUGGLE2015 Posted January 21, 2015 Report Share Posted January 21, 2015 So i had already written al IA, but muy teacher told me it was to general, and broad. It was "To what extent did the American civil war advance technology?I still want to do the IA on the civil war, I was thinking on " To what extent was Lincoln's election the main cause of the war?"But it feels too broad, or not good enough. I had also the idea of making it about how important was the march to the sea to win the war, or a certain battle.My teacher told me I could focus on how the war advanced certain technologies, such as rifles or warships but I don't know if that will be enough to wrote aboutI understand your problem. Well, one thing you could do with technology is choose one innovation that had a great effect on the war. That'll give you more ways to research, since it'll have so many sources to look at and analyze. So, for example "To what extent did the use of _____ impact the outcome of the US Civil War?" Does this help? Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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