Presentation DAMMIT! MARKED A 4 FOR THIS PRESENTATION!

[BenLeeJr]

What do you experts out there think?

 

Here is the presentation: http://www.slideshare.net/BurningD/theory-of-knowledge-marked-a-410.

 

Will upload examiner's comments on request.

Edited July 6, 2015 by BenLeeJr

[IBTryingMyBest]

What do you experts out there think?

 

Here is the presentation: http://www.slideshare.net/BurningD/theory-of-knowledge-marked-a-410.

 

Will upload examiner's comments on request.

 

Examiner's comments would be great but I have a few notes myself.

I feel like you lost most of the marks because of the powerpoint layout, you didn't setup a basic definition of what sharia law is before you started discussing it.

The way you talked about islam made it clear that you had a bias. The IB does not have a political agenda but you clearly set up everything islam related to be quite extreme.

You could have made it more interesting/visually appealing.

Maybe also cite your sources at the end?

I think you should atleast get a 5.

[theswizzlerbruh]

What do you experts out there think?

 

Here is the presentation: http://www.slideshare.net/BurningD/theory-of-knowledge-marked-a-410.

 

Will upload examiner's comments on request.

Yeah I agree with IBTryingMyBest. The one thing that struck out immediately to me was the organization and the bias. You really need to be more diplomatic, especially when we're talking about TOK. Since IB wants us to have an "international" mindset, you should show that. 

 

Your slide should also be coherently organized and have a layout that's simple(black and white always works for me ). 

 

And sure, if you could post the comments, I would like to read it. 

 

Hope this helped,

 

-theswizzlerbruh

[SallyShariff]

That was well-deserving of a 4, imo.