evelynrose Posted July 11, 2015 Report Share Posted July 11, 2015 Hello, fellow IBSers! I am currently editing my first draft of my WL essay; however I am not sure if my question is good enough. I am doing it on Chronicle of a Death Foretold, and my RS talked about Vicario remorse, honour, and machismo. My current essay title is Vicario Remorse: The effects of Latin-American machismo in Chronicle of a Death Foretold and my 'question' is How is Vicario remorse depicted and to what extent is this a result of machismo? Is my question okay, or do I need to make it tighter? Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
bethiedrama101 Posted July 12, 2015 Report Share Posted July 12, 2015 you have 2 questions smashed together, maybe make it something like "to what extent is Vicario's remorse a result of machismo?" Hope this helps! Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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