Vanessa_ Posted December 15, 2016 Report Share Posted December 15, 2016 Hi, I'm currently in the middle of writing my Historical Investigation and I am having some trouble. At first I had trouble choosing a question and ultimately choose "how did the camps of interned Japanese to that of interned Jews during World War Ⅱ?". I was having trouble on how to structure my essay so I talked with my teacher and we decided upon doing the conditions in which the internees were kept in and the following paragraph would be about the treatment towards these groups which includes physical abuse and death tolls. In each paragraph I would be comparing how in some ways they were similar, but then comparing how they were completely different. I'm still unsure of whether it's solid enough. I'm having a bit of trouble being analytical in my essay, so far I just have some personal accounts and some statistics. Any recommendations on how I can more analytical? Thank you Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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