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[Kryke]

I just finished writing my World Lit. paper 2. It is due tomorrow! Well, the copy for my english 20 mark.

It is so unfair though, my teacher just simply stated that he is not going to give my class any feedback and he is just going to mark our papers (that will go into our english 20 mark) and then we get a class to fix it up for IB (without any feedback from him!!!)

This is the reason why I'd love to hear some feedback on my paper!

Thanks!

Oh by the way, I did my paper on Chronicle of a Death Foretold by Gabriel Gracia Marquez, and focused on the society’s social code.

(It's not that long, a little bit over a thousand words )

[Aboo]

While I agree that your teacher not giving you any feedback isn't fair, you're still fortunate enough to have a class to fix it before you submit it to the IB. You should pester him for feedback and when I say pester, I mean to ask him really nicely.

You shouldn't post your essay online because when your essay goes in for assessment, it's liable to be flagged as plagiarised. I've removed the essay for you.

By the way, an ideal essay should be nearer to the 1500 words mark.

[Survival Robot]

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