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mcrivelli

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  1. I'm sorry, I don't understand what you mean here..... I am already a quarter of the way through the writing process, and have completed all of my research... I don't think I have put it to the last minute at all, for my whole grade is at the same point as I am.... Can you please elaborate
  2. Hi everyone I am currently writing my EE, and I was wondering if anyone has any tips or advice on things to avoid. Obviously try to avoid being repetative in your word choice, and using clichés. Any advice or tips would be greatly appreciated Thanks
  3. Hi It sounds like you have it really figured out and planned very well. Maybe to make it stronger, you can use other sources for each one. By that i mean, when a black person is convicted for a crime, use news paper articles, and perhaps an interview. Then when a white person gets convicted, use news paper articles and an interview as well. Or you can also use multiple articles, radio, interviews, books, etc. The more sources you use, the stronger your argument will be. Also be aware that you are not using biased sources such as fox news (one of the american strongly republican news channels). I suggest you stay with this topic, it can make a very interesting essay and can be very strong. on a side note, I am also working on my english EE, and I need some help refining my title. Would you mind taking a minute to go to my page and comment on my post? It would be so much help. I hope I gave some good advice.
  4. I need some help improving the title for my english EE. I want it to be along the lines of how a character is characterized and evolved throughout the book. Can you help me make it stronger? I am doing it on "The Kite Runner" by Khaled Hosseini. Any help would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!
  5. hi everyone I don't understand how to formulate an open question for my EE. my tok teacher did not spend much time on that, as the whole class is confused. can anyone give me some tips or guidelines for an open question?? it would mean a lot to me! thank you so much! Madison
  6. hi everyone I'm writing my essay on lang and lit. I chose to do it in category 1. Im wondering if the author of the book i chose needs to be in the IB list of prescribed authors, or if that is only applied to works studied in class. Thank you so much for your help Madison
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