This was a sample Paper 1 I did in class for our Paper 1 topic, the Arab-Israeli conflict.
This received 23/25 marks from my teacher.
I'd probably add more details to the essay if I could do it again, but I didn't want to add anything to it since it was already graded.
Sample essay I wrote in class under exam conditions for the option Rise and Rule of Single-Party States.
Question: In what ways, and for what reasons, were culture and education controlled by rulers of single-party states?
This essay earned 15 marks from my teacher.
Sample essay I wrote in class under exam conditions as part of our Rise and Rule of Single-Party States option.
Question: How far was the single-party regime in Germany successful by 1940 in achieving its aims?
Grade: 13 marks.
My HL History IA. The topic was "Why did the Russians refuse to help the Polish Underground's uprising against the Nazis in 1944?." I don't know for sure what this got, but it earned a 22/25 pre-moderation and I earned a 6 overall. I'll edit that later if I learn anything. So I think it's fine for use.
My TOK essay on the title "Using history and at least one other area of knowledge, examine the claim that it is possible to attain knowledge despite problems of bias and selection." I'm not super impressed with it, but IB seemed to think it was fine.