david akl Posted May 29, 2011 Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 Does this seem as a good/narrow enough question?"How has McDonalds and Burger King adapted to consumer needs through price competition, in Örebro Sweden." Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
master135 Posted May 29, 2011 Report Share Posted May 29, 2011 (edited) Seems to be a decent start. I would work on rephrasing "adapted to consumer needs through price competition" by either getting rid of "price" or some other way. They may not be displaying explicit price competition, and even if they do I don't fully see how the price competition relates to adapting to consumer needs (non - price competition does though). You can consider just leaving it at - what type of competition/the nature of competition between.../how do they display competitive behavior. The current phrasing also hints at the essay being more of a summary of how they have "adapted" till now. Edited May 29, 2011 by master135 Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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