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IA (Eco) help on commentary , i need to know what to add

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http://www.upi.com/Top_News/World-News/2011/08/29/Millions-in-China-face-water-shortage/UPI-82901314598051/?spt=hs∨=tn

so there is my article ^

and this is what ive done :

1. explained the problem briefly

2. done a diagram to show what is happening in china + explained the diagram

3.done a diagram and explained what a subsidy would do

4.--

now i dont know what to add! can anybody help me ? what should i include in my commentary, what is really important that i have missed?

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http://www.upi.com/Top_News/World-News/2011/08/29/Millions-in-China-face-water-shortage/UPI-82901314598051/?spt=hs&or=tn

so there is my article ^

and this is what ive done :

1. explained the problem briefly

2. done a diagram to show what is happening in china + explained the diagram

3.done a diagram and explained what a subsidy would do

4.--

now i dont know what to add! can anybody help me ? what should i include in my commentary, what is really important that i have missed?

Maybe you'd like to talk about how business is affected by the water shortage?

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