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Give me your opinion on my Business SL IA introduction please?

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Guest Fiorella

Hello everyone, this is by no means a way to promote plagarism or copying; I just simply want other opinions on my IA introduction since I'm not quite sure if this is looking good and I want a good grade. If there are a lot of grammar errors, which I hope not, I apologize but english isn't my first language.

Thanks in advance!

Question: How likely is the Kindle fire to exceed iPad sales?

Edited by Award Winning Boss
Don't post such large excerpts from internal assessments!

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It sounds pretty good to me. But i'm not sure that you're supposed to write what supporting documents you'll use in this section. Introduction is supposed to have background information about the company(ies) being talked about as well as the problem being examined. Your RQ should be stated at the end of the introduction and should be in bold.

That's how we wrote our B&M IA though. But all in all, i think it's pretty good!

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