swimbabe2015 Posted October 18, 2014 Report Share Posted October 18, 2014 I am writing my history IA on the war reparations imposed on Germany post WW1. I am struggling to write Part B, the Summary of Evidence, because it isn't supposed to have opinions in it, but my topic is the French verse the British beliefs. Below is the last two paragraphs. Can you give me some ideas on what I'm doing wrong or right? Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sandwich Posted October 18, 2014 Report Share Posted October 18, 2014 Hi, Please don't post bits of your essay online!! It will get picked up by plagiarism checkers and look like you've nicked it from somewhere. You can send it privately - either by personal message or email - to somebody on the forum if you can get them to agree to give you a hand and a second opinion, that's totally fine. But for your own good, don't post things publicly in future! 1 Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sofia. Posted October 18, 2014 Report Share Posted October 18, 2014 You can PM me the SoE if you want me to take a look I'm also working on it! Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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