mitsuki Posted November 3, 2008 Report Share Posted November 3, 2008 An Analysis of Edo Period and the Proposal of Commodore Perry Is this a good title and topic for my history extended essay? Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
filmjolk Posted November 4, 2008 Report Share Posted November 4, 2008 it's an ok topic, but what are you planning to investigate? Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Abu Posted November 4, 2008 Report Share Posted November 4, 2008 You're just reciting history here, the title has to be in a form of a question, in which you research new angles and factors which are not known to the examiner who reads your essay. Your title at the moment is neither narrow nor good. Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scade Posted November 4, 2008 Report Share Posted November 4, 2008 The question has to be something that allows you to analyze the evidence you have, however, on the contrary to what Aboo said it does not HAVE to be a question, but it is often helpful to have it in the form of a question. Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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