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Is this narrow and good?

An Analysis of Edo Period and the Proposal of Commodore Perry

Is this a good title and topic for my history extended essay?

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You're just reciting history here, the title has to be in a form of a question, in which you research new angles and factors which are not known to the examiner who reads your essay. Your title at the moment is neither narrow nor good.

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The question has to be something that allows you to analyze the evidence you have, however, on the contrary to what Aboo said it does not HAVE to be a question, but it is often helpful to have it in the form of a question.

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