hamburgertheplant Posted September 17, 2018 Report Share Posted September 17, 2018 Hi everyone, I am currently about to post my second reflection for my extended essay, and I wanted to get some feedback before I uploaded it. My RQ is "What is the effect of the exchange of ligands in the electrolyte on the Electrode Potential in a voltaic cell?" After preliminary testing of my original Research Question, I decided to change it. I found that originally, it was too broad, the methodology too complex, and the original experiment was a failure; it did not yield enough results. In response to this challenge, I developed a different RQ, which was far more successful, and I feel that I have developed a greater interest in this topic. Another challenge I faced, is finding secondary data because my methodology is quite unique. I have to take greater initiative to find authentic and reliable sources, which is something I discussed with my supervisor, so I will be looking at alternative resources available in our Chemistry department, such as other syllabuses and data books. I have also made progress with regards to my understanding of the RQ, and this will help me as I finish writing my Essay. Word count is 144 because in my first reflection I went 6 words over, so to keep it at 300 words total this one has to be a little shorter! Do let me know if this is "IB-y" enough, or if it has enough reflection, and any ideas on how to reduce the word count would be appreciated (so I can add more reflective statements) Thanks!! Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
ImAcatnow Posted September 18, 2018 Report Share Posted September 18, 2018 You could change some words or remove them completely. e.g. "preliminary testing of" "initially testing", remove "originally" add a full stop after complex, start the next sentence with The, 8 hours ago, hamburgertheplant said: I developed a different RQ, which was far more successful, and I feel that I have developed a greater interest in this topic. to I developed a different RQ which I developed a greater interest in. That should cut down a few words. If you could, you should keep what you have right now because it is very IB and shows that you are very engaged. Reply Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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