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So I have my IOP coming up and I am doing mine over In Cold Blood by Truman Capote. The current codition of my thesis is: "Truman Capote presents the idea that people ignore problems until it happens to them and it's too late for them to prevent it anymore, through the connection of Nancy Clutter's dancing with the transformation of the town throughout the novel."

It's wordy and a run on sentence I know, I tend to have that problem. I can't seem to figure out how to simplify this one or change into two sentences.

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