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Research question feels choppy...help me rephrase it please


Maurice Ravel

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I think that perhaps 'influence' is the wrong word to use. Maybe use a word like 'nature' or 'prescence'.

Make it really simple and easy to understand, i had to read it a few times before i really knew what you were asking.

Apart from that it sounds quite interesting and well focused.

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or maybe change it to How does the fairytale genre influence Oscar Wilde's stance on tradition against pragmatism in The Canterville Ghost? or maybe get rid of "on tradition" and leave it as stance against pragmatism.

Hope i've helped XD

Suuupppeeer!! It was the 'what' that bothered me because it is more conventional to use how/to what extent. YOU FIXED IT!!!! Thanks so much.

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